tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3841939281455717340.post318634038937585929..comments2024-03-27T12:13:34.159-05:00Comments on The Moral Premise Blog: Story Structure Craft: Questions Answered about RomComsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3841939281455717340.post-70530119900622376832011-04-09T19:32:57.942-05:002011-04-09T19:32:57.942-05:00Good catch, Janet. I have fixed the post.Good catch, Janet. I have fixed the post.Stan Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12084603289444240062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3841939281455717340.post-12491223974293025652011-04-09T16:55:40.809-05:002011-04-09T16:55:40.809-05:00I've read the posts you mentioned and they hel...I've read the posts you mentioned and they helped me so much with my story planning.This is an amazing blog. <br /><br />A quick question about the EXPANDED CONFLICT OF VALUES AND MORAL PREMISE slide I (The Smith Obsevation)<br /><br />At one end of the continuum is the Heading 'Destructive vice' and the vice given is :Deceptive.<br /><br />At the other end of the continuum is the heading 'Repressive vice' and the vice given is: scrupulous<br /><br />But the Moral Premise for this is:<br />A deceptive or REPRESSIVE heart leads to rejection but a truthful and compassionate heart leads to acceptance. <br />I struggled to understand the meaning of 'repressive heart' then <br />started to wonder if the word 'repressive' in the moral premise should actually be 'scrupulous?<br /><br /> Should it maybe read:<br />A deceptive or SCUPULOUS heart leads to rejection but a truthful and compassionate heart leads to acceptance.Janet Chhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14898590854473007918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3841939281455717340.post-29140254297413495272011-04-09T14:21:28.749-05:002011-04-09T14:21:28.749-05:00Thank you so much for explaining that. Off to read...Thank you so much for explaining that. Off to read those other posts you linked to.Janet Chhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14898590854473007918noreply@blogger.com